Build 1.5 In Progress And Sharing Some Concerns.


I Wanted to share that after the release of my first build of Lykaois, I was honestly shocked on the outcome. Thousands of page views, hundreds, hell almost thousands of downloads, and plenty of 5-star ratings. I'd want to be the first to say thank you to all of those who are enjoying the story so far. With so many people supporting this, I can't thank everyone personally, but do know, I see you! It's been two days since release, and the number of people interacting with this project is astounding. 

Now! There is a few things I'm gonna discuss here and now before this gets too big and so y'all know what is what. I've gotten some reviews and even DMs about Lykaois these few days. I'm all for constructive criticism and all, but there is a difference between that and well... being an outright ass. Y'all can probably already see where this is going, but were going to talk about it, because I am not only seeing it grow here but I've been seeing it happen to other authors/artist on here as well.  We get those who give these harsh reviews and comments because they don't like something about the story, or even try to have it bend to their will. Some don't understand some points in the story and it frustrates them, and that's fine! But if there's something you don't understand, ask. Don't go on a review rant before clarifying what you want to know.  This may not only discourage the author but many potential readers. They may see your review and be like "oh maybe I shouldn't read this one." Some people take reviews to heart. What you may not understand the next person might. 

"Fenris it sounds like you cant handle criticism." 

Oh no don't get it twisted I can believe you me. But there's a difference between that and being a jerk.  These "concerns" (very lightly put) I've been getting has had a certain pattern to them. The folks with these "concerns" are  projecting themselves and comparing me to other authors. I am in NO way trying to be any other author. I did this my way, and either people like it or they don't and that's fine. Going on a rant isn't going to change much on how I write this novel. Before you push that send button think about what you said and how it may come across. Is this an actual review? Is this a general concern or are you just confused and it frustrates you?  Yes there's a difference. Don't come on here and act you know what the author maybe going for or like you know a certain way a VN is supposed to be because I didn't get the memo. 

"Fenris you sound like an ass and very unapproachable."

Again don't get it twisted. I'm just blunt and I am very approachable. The way my life has been and what I been through, you learn not to let people walk all over you or let them talk to you in any way and try and make it justified by saying "No offense or anything." If you have to add anything like that along the line of trying to tell someone something, you probably shouldn't open your mouth because they're probably going to get offended and it's going to come off offensive.  Listen no matte how far this novel goes, I'm not going to change who I am. What you see is what you get. I've seen many popular furs in the fandom who hit the "spotlight" but put of a face in order to make other people happy without worrying about themselves. By then, it ain't worth it. You're never going to make everyone happy. Someone is going to have those standards you will never meet.  I know I'm not everyone's cup of tea, coffee, alcoholic drink, whatever you want to describe it as lol, but I know who I am as a person.  I know there's some criticism that may sting a bit but is warranted, but I know the difference between that and a asshole.  I may seem unapproachable and I've been told that many times, but the ones who actually approach and know me knows that I'm a friendly ass person. You see me at a con and are like "Hey Fenris! Can I take a photo? Can we hang for a bit?" Hell yeah let's do it! "Fenris let me buy you a drink!" Hell yeah let's kill it! In person I feed off energy. Negative energy warrants a negative reaction. 

"Fenris are you going to continue to use those AI generated background?"

Hey it's already out there. Let me tell you guys something. I don't know how this may sound but I don't honestly mean anything negative about it but how some of these AI generators work almost no different then how artist work.  Let me explain and break it down:

Artist: Gets a request for some artwork to be done. Person pays artist to do a specific piece. Artist ask for some references to help better their workflow. Customer gives said references from various sources to help the artist better understand what the customer wants. Artist completes the work done in their style and customer is happy.

AI generator: Customer opens ai. Customer types up keywords pertaining to what they want. AI scans the web for references matching the keywords the customer typed . AI generates various images based on the keywords the customer typed and the references it found from various sources. 

My point I'm trying to make here is the process is almost the same. These ai generate artwork by going through various references found from multiple sources.  Most people use those generated images and edit them to fit their own style.  Artist ask for references so they have a better understanding on what to make and what they're being paid for.  Now there are some ai out there that outright steals art. They're not hard to miss because they don't hide it. Would I ever generate art for my visual novel?  No. I don't see why I would need too. There's plenty of websites that I can search for what I need and it'll give me free to use, non-copyrighted results that I can edit to fit my story. As for the scenery assets I use now I didn't even know it was AI generated until someone mentioned it. I search itch.io asset shop for what I needed, found this page where they had loads of backgrounds that are perfect for what I need, downloaded them and boom. Lykaois. On top of it all, it's all FREE! I have never, and will never pay AI or an AI "artist" for work. Artist will always have an upper hand on this subject to me simply for the fact, they're living beings. Artist take pride in this: Those AI will never be good at giving what people want. They only give a general idea. If I had the money to spend to have someone work on these scenes trust me I would of. But time are tough, I'm a broke ass bitch, and this was free lol. Do I support AI? No. I won't ever dip money into it. It's a nice tool to get ideas and inspiration from I won't deny that. But if I ever need artwork done right, I'm spending the money on real artist. 

"Fenris you could lose support over this message."

If I lose support or followers over THIS message specifically, then it's probably for the best. Point blank period. We're all chillin and vibin here. We don't want any negativity.

"Fenris I was just saying this not how things go. It should be more like this or that."

Speak up.

"Usually most VNs are layered out like this. This way doesn't make any sense."

Speak up.

"This doesn't seem right. How does the character go from this to that? Also instead of writing it like this or that, it needs to be  like this."

SPEAK UP.

"Hey Fenris, there's somethings in the story I don't quite get and want a better understanding. Can you explain some of the scenes here and here for me? I'd appreciate it."

Ok. I got you. See? It's not that hard and by some reason you simply can't enjoy it, that's fine. Thank you for trying it out we'll see you later. I hate that I had to bring this up already and was honestly hoping I didn't have to, but better it be sooner then later.  I AM BY NO MEANS TRYING TO BE AUTHOR OF THE YEAR. I am just making content expressing my imagination and putting it out there for others to enjoy.

ANYWHO!

Onwards to the other reason I am here. Build 1.5 is underway. Those who have shown nothing but love and support really gave me the inspiration to stop my break and want to continue progressing the story. I've had so many nights prior to the release where I was up until almost sunrise because of how excited I was to make this. That being said here are some updates that are to be expected in the next build:

-Chapter 1 Part 2.

-Beginning of Chapter 2.

-Added dialogue.

-Various grammar and spelling corrections.

-New/updated sound effects and music.

-New CG cutscenes (Possibly) 

I'm hoping to have the artist who made my ref sheet and sona (PFP picture.) added to the project. She was originally going to be the one who made my sprites, but I personally couldn't afford to commission a sprite with so many various emotions.  I ain't got it like that lol. But when I do, she is definitely worth the money. I do want her to create some extra scenes to toss in there to really give more of a...what's the word...immersive feel I guess? She's been my go to artist for a few years now. I've been really proud of all her work. But thank you for taking the time to read this and possibly see where I'm coming from.  Patreon members will have an early update release by a week or two. Also Patreon members will get their names added to the credits. You guys take care and I'll be seeing you. 

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I really want to give this series a try but I think I'll wait a bit, I'm already in between so many in progress VNs that I'm scared won't get finished and this one looks good so I don't wanna add a new one to the list but I'll be keeping an eye on it. That being said whatever ppls criticisms are ik how they can get but I hope you'd not let any of the non constructive ones get to you. Some people will be angry because they are passionate about something and feel things could be better and some are just assholes who want to manipulate ppl into bending things their way (instead of creating their own work). So glad to hear you'll be doing you regardless of feedback like that. 

All i can say is that this is your work, your ART.. you do you.. everyone who doesn´t like it.. tough luck.. but from what i can see you have way more supporters than critics.. which is easy to see.. Chapter 1 so far is amazing in my point of view.. i love it and can´t wait to see more.

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Thanks! Right back at ya! 

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Honestly I'll keep the short and sweet.

I'm impressed, you have yourself a good opener to a good story so far.

Keep it up, you will see me in your patrons soon enough.

Thank you! I’m glad you liked it so far! Keep on the look out for future updates. It’ll involve added dialogue and lots of polishing. 

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Woah this VN was pretty good. You sure are building up a defense for every kind of accusation. I hope you do find the time to chill. Your art is amazing and those who appreciate it want more. Let the haters hate in silence and let's ignore them. Sure am glad to have stumbled onto your VN. Def deserves all its popularity.

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Yeah I had too. Because this got a lot of popularity fairly quickly but with it came the negative people who personally messaged me about my novel and believing it had to be a certain way pertaining to how they see it. This is to let people know while I am all for criticism I’m not for trying to please a sole individual and them egging me to make a change for them. I wrote this so everyone can enjoy it and put my imagination out there. I don’t want my novel to be wrapped around that negativity and while I know some negative folks will slip through the cracks, the amount of negative message I’ve received after this post has dropped significantly so I believed I made my point. 

Also I think I received your review. Your name seems familiar. I took that review to heart in a good way. That’s the type of reviews people should be getting. Also if your the one I’m talking about I definitely recommend going and starting that novel of yours! It seems like a good story. Let your imagination fly! 

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People complain too much on everything. If you want to use AI for background then so be it. You just can't compare different VN's to other VN's because all VN's will be different and the stories the author create is unique in its own way.  Personally I enjoyed Chapter 1 Part 1 and I can't wait for Chapter 1 Part 2! Can't wait for the story to unfold overtime and the lovely romance to accompany with it. :) 

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Indeed and I made this post to nip that in the bud. There will be no hate here. I've been around a long time and have read plenty of VNs and FVNs to know everyone is different and have a way they show their own imaginations. The thing with AI is I personally don't use AI and the artist behind some of the backgrounds only used AI as a reference point before going to photoshop and building them in his own style. Plus I use a non-copyrighted site that gives images to use for free as well so not all my images are even from this artist but they do help a great deal. 

Other than that I thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the novel regardless! I appreciate it! 

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Excuse me, but is something problematic to advise you in using generic ren py assets for your novel that Ai backgrounds,  please?

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No. What was the issue is people assumed I, myself, generated these backgrounds and simply threw them into my novel. What I mention is the person who made these backgrounds did so by using generated images as a reference then edited them in their own style to produce them. No different then in how a regular artist does there own work. Plus I also got flak because people assumed I BOUGHT images when everything I use came free. I don't ever financially support pure AI software but I do believe it's a good asset as a tool to help with work. Not claim as you're own work.

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Okey understable but many Ren py backgrounds are also free to use. But is your choose to use Ai backgrounds.

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Oh I know. That's where I found them originally was in the asset area. I didn't know they were ai until recently but since they explained they only used the images as a reference for making their own, it didn't bother me. 

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Many have a problem really but still i don't understand the problem with a Ai as background.

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Probably because people think it takes away from real human artist. The fear they'll be replaced and wont make any money off it because some artist use art to make a living.  Unfortunately not everyone has the means to afford the artist. But I feel as long as artist use them as a reference, a tool per  say, I don't see the issue is with them. It's no different then an artist using a reference  to make something of their own. Art comes from somewhere one way or another. Sometimes artist has to use a reference to better visualize what they want and that's ok as long as they make their own.  No different then what AI is doing or what it could be used for. So I agree with you, I don't see the problem. A lot of people blow it out of proportion.  

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Good on you people compare shit way to much to other VN's if the author want's a big fluffy huggable wolf in his VN leave him alone i ain't complaining!

Aside from that the writing was good keep it up and good luck i hope to see it finished someday.

Thank you! And who wouldn't want a big fluffy huggable wolf?! I'm with you on that haha! Again thank you and I hope you enjoy what's to come!

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The VN is amazing so far and I am eagerly looking forward to future updates.

The combination of great story telling, and some wolf cuteness makes for a great experience.

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I thought so too when I was planning this story! Thank you so much for reading and I’m really glad you’re enjoying it so far. People like you and everyone else who have had nothing but awesome things to say give me more inspiration to continue my work! I was going to take a break after the first release due to how much I was working on it but I’m so happy that people are enjoying it, I already started working on build 1.5. I appreciate the feedback! 

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I have seen  some comments of the typical my wolf bla bla and comparisons with the 2 very famous vn that I won't be mentioning. All I'm gonna say is , I thoroughly enjoyed this first update and set up for the story to come , there is some criticism to be had sure but I agree some ppl are coming the wrong way about it already, Keep the good work and good luck out there 🙌

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Thank you and I agree! I welcome criticism for sure. But you’re absolutely right people tend to go about it the wrong way. The way the story line goes the way it does because it’s set up for more events that may happen in the future. I appreciate you for understanding and I’m so happy you’re enjoying what you’re reading so far! 

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For what its worth, right out the gate, the story kept me engaged and created the scenario of a sole survivor and his struggles being alone. The narrative is very clear so far with my only minor confusion was why the fighting started but I'm assuming will be cleared up in the future which does create that "want" to see how this all happens.


For the art, yes artists do deserve their credit and AI generated stuff is super common these days. It's pretty hard to come up with all the funds to have talented individuals put together everything, especially if the project isn't being fully self earning and requires the funds to come out of pocket. Make it work however you need to without compromising your values.


As a whole, I really look forward to seeing how this story goes and do hope to see it to its completion. In terms of any other critiques or reviews about it, a couple grammatical mistakes, but nothing super major. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update 😀 

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Thank you! Indeed the reason behind why there was a war that ended humanity will be explained down the road along with a lot of other mysteries like how the MC ended up on earth, how are they a native to Lycania etc.  Explanation about the war itself will happen through flashback stories the MC tells people or his dreams. There's lots of things where stuff happens but I try not to give away too much story so soon. I'm expecting this to be a pretty lengthy read. So far half of chapter 1 is the only thing completed. 

I agree with you completely on the art aspect of things. If I had the funds to pay for the art I would of but I am doing all of this by myself and I appreciate you for understanding that. I, myself, did not generate these scenes but a lot f folks are acting like I did. I'm using these backgrounds that just so happen to of been generated by AI for reference and edited by a different the artist. If the artist was trying to make money off them I can understand the frustration behind it. I wouldn't of paid if they were. 

Again I thank you for the support! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the story so far. Makes me even more inspired to give readers who enjoy my imagination more to look forward too.